Tuesday, April 14, 2009

"who am i?" another poem about me. what do u think?

“Who am I?”





I am a drip of water


Dripping on and on


Until the base is full


I flow over when it is full


That is who I am and who I want to be


That is my best place to me





“What am I?”





I am a new plant


Coming out of the dirt


Struggling to come out


To be the earth’s precious gift


I am the morning sun light


Fighting over the darkness of night


I am the evening moon light


Taking over the dim sun light


To give the world a new bright


Day of light





“Where am I?”





I am in the Atlantic Ocean


Looking above the two directions


I look up to see the west


And I see a bunch of new lights


I look up to the east


I see the past years of delight


I see deep inside the east


And my head hearts from


The memories of the past


I feel sad that I am absent


But I feel good that I am present





“What can I be?”





Me.


Who is exactly me?


I don’t know surely


But I know I want to be me


Who is always happy


Someone who sees the world beauty


Someone who sees the dark side of life


And be a continuous light





“What am I as me?”


I am same and different


I am someone who learns from the past


And that is why I am always happy


When I am just like me!

%26quot;who am i?%26quot; another poem about me. what do u think?
It is an inspired poem on the theme of indivuality and happiness. You don%26#039;t pretend there is no sorrow in the world and yet you can see the joy beyond our woes.


We never really know who we are, as we see only a part of ourselves, we don%26#039;t know how others see us and our view will be subjective, and we are always changing. Life is change, for without change we are %26quot;pillars of salt%26quot;, like Lot%26#039;s wife in the Bible who looked back at Sodom (lingered on and was covered by volcanic ash). You cannot dwell on the past or you will be like her, a stone.
Reply:got it now. surely, you%26#039;ve got talent to explore further this elusive identity. Always remember you are unique in answer to your question, Who is exactly me?











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Reply:cool poem..i have read it b4..


i liked the %26quot;what can i be?%26quot; part and the last 2 lines


i am not deep like that, atleast my poemz arent
Reply:great poem
Reply:u would do fine in a coffee shop reading



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