What do you think of this?

think freely,keep an open mind,an open,thankful heart


and learn from the mistakes you make,these lessons play a part,


take time for someone in distress,and lend a helping hand,


be patient with the lonely ones,and try to understand.


make time for simply being you,to build your plans and schemes,


to see the beauty of the earth and dream your your special dreams,


enjoy the flowers,plants and trees as seasons come and go,


and celebrate the gift of life and all it can bestow

What do you think of this?
beautiful indeed it is...remember you create your own style and everyone is unique
Reply:Sounds like the sort of thing Patience Strong used to write.
Reply:Sounds like a simplified amalgamation of %26quot;Desiderata%26quot; and %26quot;Smell more flowers%26quot; rolled into one quick soundbite.
Reply:looks good but you may want to try separating all the different ideas into their own lines cuz as of now its just kind of one block...
Reply:lovely
Reply:Irritating- there is something coy and smug about it. It is preachy and banal.





Try writing from observed, felt experience.
Reply:Reads like a cheesey hallmark greeting card.
Reply:Tina K, I think that is really good. You have been really thoughtful. It%26#039;s great!


I hope you don%26#039;t mind but I am going to copy that out. I am impressed x



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