Friday, July 31, 2009

May this dr....... tell me how did you feel?

May this dream come true





a rose smells so sweet


never knew untill , bought 1 for u


i gifted you a rose perfume


u told me it will end


wanted to give u a immortal rose





the journey begain


started feeling rose in your fragment


hope you start feeling me





i wish upon a shooting star


when u wakeup


may u find my wish


a flower pot in your room


me planted as immortal rose

May this dr....... tell me how did you feel?
eliteskills.com is a poetry website, you should probably join.
Reply:i luv it
Reply:~~very sweet~~
Reply:It's good
Reply:I think it sucks, but that might just be me
Reply:what the ???? is this? How did I feel? Kinda aggravated because I thought it was going to be a medical question.
Reply:i see potential. you definetely have the soul of a poet.
Reply:Sweet.
Reply:keep trying
Reply:very nice
Reply:it has potential
Reply:I thought this was supposed to be about a doctor?





Why can't you freaking people spell out words anymore?



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