Friday, July 31, 2009

MAY THIS DREAM COME TRUE ------------hey girls read this poem and feel my emotions , what do u think?

may this dream come true


a rose smells so sweet


never knew untill , bought 1 for u


i gifted you a rose perfume


u told me it will end


wanted to give u a immortal rose





the journey begain


started feeling rose in your fragment


hope you start feeling me





i wish upon a shooting star


when u wakeup


may u find my wish


a flower pot in your room


me planted as immortal rose .








BYE GIRL HOPE U ENJOYED THIS POEM

MAY THIS DREAM COME TRUE ------------hey girls read this poem and feel my emotions , what do u think?
that's beatiful, I'd cry if I recieved a poem like that. She's a lucky girl even if she doesn't realise it.
Reply:then she doesn't know what she is missing.:) Report It

Reply:real nice
Reply:OMG that's so sweet, U should totally publish it, U can fell the love U have 4 this gurl
Reply:that is so nice
Reply:It went right through my heart !do you have more like that?
Reply:very cute!!
Reply:Don't ever stop writing or dreaming, and may your heart's desires come true..
Reply:how sweet
Reply:nice......................... very
Reply:That was so sweet !!!!!!!!
Reply:it touched my heart so I think it touched many other girls' hearts
Reply:I LOVED IT BUT IT DOES'NT RHYME
Reply:I can actually smell the rose...
Reply:i luv it! you shud publish!



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